Hey, this is great! I especially like how you used one word for your first line. It really describes an explosion well. Was it a challenge to write a haiku? You should probably give this post a title, hehe. E noho ra.
What a great haiku, Ariana, I also like the fact you have used one word for the first line (and what a perfect words to describe a volcano). Can you think of any other words that have 5 syllables?
Tino pai, great work. How long did it take you to find the right words to fit the pattern?
ReplyDeleteHey, this is great! I especially like how you used one word for your first line. It really describes an explosion well. Was it a challenge to write a haiku? You should probably give this post a title, hehe. E noho ra.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great haiku, Ariana, I also like the fact you have used one word for the first line (and what a perfect words to describe a volcano). Can you think of any other words that have 5 syllables?
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